All Comments on 'Tender Touches'

RHAF, Very slow build up..... Excellent tension.....I would say this deserves a sequel.... Smouldering passion, sudden awareness, and beautific release - all there. Excellent read!

You have created a pair of fine characters. The reader can believe their passion. Please continue with the story.

Thanks, Red. Another stellar piece of work.

yes I think this needs a couple more chapters....Another great story Red just keep them coming...

What a lucky stroke that brought your story on line. Your buildup of the story line was very good as you let the story build. I hope you continue this story.

I would say that she gave him a very good, first-time lesson in lovemaking.. He did seem eager to complete the course, too.. I am left with wondering where they go with their lives on the morrow.. I can well guess, though.. It IS spelled out little by little during the day.. I'm sure they followed it.. Excellent read.

This is the ideal deflowering.....a caring, sexy, and intelligent tutor in the act....I wouldn't have minded losing my virginity to her. Such a delightful imagination you display yet again, Red.

Men and women both could use a great sexual mentor like her.

This is basically a very sweet first-timer's fantasy. I was happy to read about realistically attractive people who are neither model-thin nor model-young.

However, a word to the wise:

Women do NOT want to have their nipples (or, for God's sake, their clitoris!) "bitten" or worse yet, "chewed on". Trust me, guys, on this one!! A very light, delicate touch is called for at first, which you can gradually allow to become more vigorous, but if you care about pleasing your lover -- and you really should, it's in your own interest -- leave your teeth out of it.

this woman DOES want her nipples and clit 'chewed on'. devine sensations. havins said that - i loved this story, in fact i love all your writing RHF. thanx for taking the time!

You're quite welcome... It was a pleasure to write and I too can safely say... I like having my nipples bitten. OMG. . . it feels wonderful and a man biting and pulling on my clit, yep that too makes this girl wet! It may not be for every woman, but it definitly works for me. ;) ~ RedHairedandFriendly

Beautiful story Red, wonderful writing

Well-written, intelligent, and a wonderful exploration of two people coming together. Everything a lit story should be, but far too often isn't.

This is a splendid HOT SEX story! OK, they just met, but the tale develops well, with good humor and mutually generous passion. I love it!

Excellent imagery in your writing. The characters seem like real people as you've portrayed them, not as cardboard cutouts I find in much writing. I can "see" the action as it unfolds, and feel like I'm watching/participating. Keep up the good work.

Oh lawd this is hot. More women who love boys stories, pur-leez

VERY EXCITING...LOVED THE DETAILS...SEXY AND WONDERFUL. HMMMMMM FELT LIKE I WAS RIGHT THERE WITH THEM SEXUALLY. OMG

This was good please write more. Although i prefer to hear about younger couples versus this middle age couple.

But this was still good. A great story plot indeed. Please write more.

Loved every thing about your story, how it built up to them having a loving sexual experience.

Connie was a tender and patience teacher.

I think it will lead to a long and loving relationship.

Wonderful prose, nearly melted with the perfect lineage to the ultimate.....or was that the ultimate?

Can't wait for some type of continuation.

Thank You

AA great read. The pace was excellent. Tom and Connie were believable characters and the whole story was mesmerizing. I enjoyed it thoroughly. One of the best I've encountered here. I don't know what you can do for an encore, but I'm sure it will be worthwhile.

You are such a good writer! The reality, the tenderness, the pace, you really hit it out of the park!

Well paced, and well described. A very erotic tale, told well. Thank you!

I loved the story - the characters are well developed and likeable. The gal is warm and willing, the man is responsive and kind. Great stuff!

love how slowly this story unfolds. The time spent on foreplay and and oral sex-extremely erotic. I love this! You are such a great writer!

Loved the story and so well described.

For ABC101. They weren't 'older folk' but they were mature people. A great joy to read something that was not immature brats with the physical attributes but lacking severely in the emotional maturity which is such an essential part of the real world.

Whenever you want!

LOVE that she's a nurse-rancher!

Lotsa Very Nice details....

P.S... One of my lovers insisted on having her nipples BIT,

as hard as I could.

This beautiful story made me warm and cozy. I have found the edges of heaven

What an amazing story!

One of the most erotic stories on this site.

Would that I had been a Tom and met a Connie.

Definitely top class !

If you haven't already, you should try to become a professional romance novelist! This is very publishable and marketable material... not to mention mind-blowingly, erotic!! Amazing work, keep it up please!!

loved it,, agreed one of my best reads

What more can I say ~~ one of the best I have read on here.! Kind of short but hopefully there will be a part ll typed on this one.! Well I can wish can't I..??

A "5" for sure.*

very good, wish this one had a 2nd chapter

What more could we the readers give than a "5" all the way.!*

Very nice read and really enjoyed this one more than the last 25 or so stories that I have read ~~ as some were close but most just lacked the wham bam buster of the kind that seals the deal.!^

Is there going to be a "5" .?

You MUST give us their next morning!!!

What a lead into...Hope she comes on his face again this morning...

SLOWLY WORKED UP TO AN INTIMACY OF ORAL SEX

AND RAW FUCK

Fine story, believable characters, very good sex scene. You missed a few apostrophes, but anyone who can use "bated" correctly is OK in my opinion. Thank you.

If an sexually inexperienced man is lucky enough to have a sexually experienced woman to guide him like this, she truly loves him. Learn from her guidance, follow it and swallow your dumb macho pride and you'll have a woman that will love you forever. Sex will only become more intimate, loving and exciting and pleasurable. She is giving you something very rare in life, true love. Orpheum 69

Amazing and very much like my first introduction to making love with a 6 year older female friend,

In retrospect, all men wishes the first time was as good as Tom’s experience.

I dearly love red hair...

I dearly love nurses...

Two fingers, dancing on your G-spot...

My tongue surrounding your clit...

Where and When?...

I do bite, as requested...

What is holding us back?...