All Comments on 'Thank You Jeannie Ch. 01-06'

The story is great, both attractive and exciting. Hope you write a great end to it. Congratulations.

Ormuz

this story was awsome, you really get a feel for who the charactors are, their feelings, their thoughts...

the protagonist is easy to relate to due to knowing many prudish families (very glad that wasn't my experence, my family was very open) and the whole brother sister sex thing was very easy going, there was no "oh my god i can't do this with my sibling", it's just another kind of love that presents itself, alot more realistic than some stories i've read.

I also like the romance content, the whole senario was an act of love and exploration rather than getting into somebody's pants.

i hope that the author continues in his writings, i would definitly like to read more of them.

-- cpgeek@hotpop.com

It was beautiful

I feel really deprived, would love to have had such an experience

The characters were so believable.. the sexual exploration so natural... the heat so intense!!! a beautiful expression of love and enjoyment... Superb!

My god once I started reading this I just couldn't stop...I wonder...if chapters 1~6 were this hot I can only hope that the rest remains just as hot and just as sweet. Bravo for a writing this.

Jeff

This story was absolutely fantastic.

I have read many different types of stories, as I review them for a living, but only a couple of this genra. It came highly reccomended and I must say that the author is fantastic. They know how to engage the reader and keep the interest, unlike other stories where you struggle to concentrate after the first sex scene. It is a wonderful piece of writing, and I hope that this person composes many more pieces in the future if they are all going to be like this. !!!A must read!!!

One of the most erotic stories I have enjoyed on this sight. Well written , not in a hurry, very loving.

I look forward to seeing more of your work. I need to sign off now lol.

Thank you Jeannie 1-6 was one of the best stories of its kind that I've ever read. The characters are so believable, and the love, while filled with lust is pure. I can't wait to read more.

It made me so incredibly horny!

Keep on the good work.

Nice clean soft sex... the way i like it.

The tension is built up slowely and the colorful

words used really make your fantasy take you higher

and higher.

Dag-GONE!!! You are a GREAT writer!!! If anything, the ONLY suggestion I would have would be to write more, man, write more!!!! YOW!!!!

Thanks for the great effort. This is easily in a class by itself. Terrific erotic writing,

excellent

Superb. Thank you!

How utterly delightful to read a hot story with no bad behavior at all. Just nice and sexy. Surprisingly engaging.

I have read this story numerous times over the past 3 years. It is one of the few I would ever read more than a couple times. It never ceases to amaze me at how well you write.

I really liked this story. This incestuous relationship developed out of a series of conscious decisions and not as a result of an accident. There was a lot of love between the brother and sister.

Hooterhunter

great story!!!

yOUR STORY WAS IMPOSSIBLE TO PUT DOWN. i SHALL READ ITMANY TIMES OVER. THANK YOU.

Erotic to the n'th degree

Sexy 100% Couldnt be better

I loved your story. Couldnt be better...i just dont get why its called Thank You Jeannie.

A slow, smooth developement of the brother/sister relationship and their exploration of first time sex. I don't know how it could be done better. Thanks

I definitely liked the developement of the two characters. I also like that you didn't make them seem like porn stars, either with a huge penis for the guy, or way to Barbie-like of a body on the girl. I like the whole timeline, and how they're both first timers and are exploring eachother. I wish this site had more writers like you.

Truely awesome story. Nice developement of the story. Also it's named that since that is the show that started it all(show they were watching).

good but you made a goof in chapter 4 it is impossible for her chin to hit his sac while in a 69 her forhead yes chin no way either you are a 10 year old virgin or you don't think before writing little goofs really ruin a story

Her chin hit his balls while they were in a sixty-nine? That sucks. Besides that, you need to fire your editor. Otherwise a completely entrancing. Captures the pure essence without being screwed up by little innacuracies, repetition, or lack of effort.

My favorite part was how everything had gone according to plan for so long, then all of a sudden she climbs aboard and has him pop her.

One series I wish there was more and more to so much that I look forward to being done with my day so I can sit down on the computer and know I have a good read ahead of me.

One of the best stories I ever seen.

One of the best stories I ever seen.

None of you people know anything about writing, the guys writing this aren't exactly out there on the shelves! Talk about slow smooth character development, that's also known as poor character development, it was silly and unrealistic! That said, it's only porn and I enjoyed it's difference to the videos on redtube! Just some points of constructive criticism! And I pissed myself laughing about that error - chin/balls contact during a 69...retarded, but brilliant ha ha!

Great story telling. Loved it. Thanks

Wow, So far this is one of the best Brother\Sister stories I've read yet. Can't wait to read more. Thanks....

This is one of the best brother & sister stories I have read here - thank you!

I hope this series continues for some time.

Pure joy, and yes - very hard cock and pussy as a result - my honey and I have certainly enjoyed reading it aloud to each other and following your directions - lol

It's almost exactly how it was with my sister

This is one of the best brother & sister stories i have ver read.

It is so romantic & sexy

I thought your story was terrific! It took its time, but it also hit all the high spots, too. When I return, I will go looking for 7 and 8. Excellent, keep up the good work! BTW, who's Jeannie?

I Dream of Jeannie was an American tv show in the late 60s or early 70s about an American astronaut who finds a bottle with a sexy female genie inside named Jeannie (Barbara Eden). She grants wishes that cause problems that have to be dealt with in each episode.

Very well written! If I was able to,i'd give it 10 stars instead of 5, but anyway I still have it 5!

Question is: Why would anyone want to re-print this story? Bad pulp

Just what I needed today. Slow building story filled with many surprises. I thought it would take longer for Sue to lose her cherry.

The best I've read on this site so far, and I've read some great ones. This one stays real, like it could actually happen, there's no awkward transitioning from brother-sister to lovers, like most of these stories have. It was very natural feeling. Just great, really well done. :)

I loved your storie it was great one of the best one I have read.

this one was really intimate, (very intense love), I'm rather a really romantic/soft person, and this story was really intense. Excellent detail

This is the best story I've read on this site. Just exactly what I like to fantacize about. It is written to be erotic for either male or female readers. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Well done!

I am not ashamed to admit it, I'm a sucker for romance. In movies, books or life in general. I have to say you have hit the perfect mix of romance and action. Both the story and the author have been placed in my favorites list. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

That was sweet and lovely. I wish Sue had been my sister

This was totally believable, slow burn, and very sweet without losing erotic ness. I loved it.

For a moment there i thought it said "thank you jesus." now that would have been interesting.

Loved the build up and descriptions.

dude this is one of the best story i have read on here. slow start and takes it to the peak. damn good

Reminds me of me and my cousin

Sexy and wonderfully erotic...I loved this story.

Loved every word xxx

Got me to the moon and back ;)

I can't get enough of this story! U have done such a wonderful job of building it up and being descriptive:) my panties have been so wet the entire time, and once (when he finally slipped it into her) I almost came, simply from the words on the page!!

IT BLEW MY MIND. THANKS FOR GREAT READ!!!

I lost my virginity to my brother. We're still going at it. We've been together for the past 25 years. 3 kids later and we're teaching them the right ways of incest. Will keep up the family tradition forever.

Slow and gentle, warm and loving. A really nice story written with passion that is often missing. Just very well structured.

It's the best! even 10, 20, or 100 stars is not enough to rate this story. Hardly can wait to read the full series....

First time back to the site in, had to sift through mediocre stories, then i found this. Years past, i THOROUGHLY enjoyed A{} almost perfect awakening. Still one of my favorites. The increased pace of this one is lovely, and i do enjoy getting engrossed in the characters' perspectives and development. wm_sexspear = favorite author.

I have read many good stories here and some not so good but this story is the best that I recall. Well written, the flow of the story is perfectly paced, characters well defined. The sex parts are hot but tender with love. Not a moment of boredom. Totally loved it, thank you Wm_Sexspear.

Arthur

So the moron who said it was garbage is full of shit and himself. He could do better have him bring it. Personally You brought the story to life as any brother would die to have a sister like this. And in real life, im looking forward to the next segment, so thanks for being a great writer. I too have many ideas for stories but as yet to put pen to paper or fingers to the keyboard lol. Keep up the good work.

VERY hot, love the dialogue and the characters.

Going into my all-time best list.

Certainly looking forward to following chapters, and then your very long work.

I read a lot and really enjoyed your story of brother/sister incest (which is second only to mother/son in my book). This also might explain how the children of very strict parents usually get away from their stern upbringing as soon as they can. Only one person in my immediate family (brothers, sisters, children, nieces and nephews, first cousins) who were raised or semi-raised by religious fanatics stayed within the borders of the holier-than-thou parentage. Not much incest (that I know of) but quite a few of the normal type perverts, LOL. Thank you for writing.

one of. the best. please keep writing incest stories. thank you.

Thank you for giving me the best sex story i have ever read. A wonderful incest story, showing the delights of sex

This is one of the most thoughtful bro-sis romances I have ever read. I'm looking forward to reading the story continuation, hoping to find that at its end the brother has the chance to do his mom Too!

Thanx!

well written, very good story, I love the way you describe each person.I am looking forward to reading more, keep up the good work.

I liked the way it was paced - no hurry, no wham bam stuff. Nicely constructed story about innocent and experimental pleasures between loving siblings. Intense! Thank you for the stimulation!

Previous comments said it all, can't wait for chapters 7 to 12

I havent read this in quite a while, still great stuff and a wonderful read! If only all of our learning experiences were like this! :)

You write wonderfully about your characters and their love for each other.

What a delightful story about two adorable and very-much-in-love sibs. I happily gave it five stars. But, just once I'd like to read a story where the young lady has pubic hair from start to finish, sans the seemingly obligatory shaving scene. I know I'm in the minority here but, I feel about shaved vaginas like Lewis felt about silicone wonders. These are young women, not pre-pubescent children!

It's nice to see two people who love and respect each other. Instead of fumbling around, not enjoying or learning from the experience they take their time teaching, touching, talking, to enhance their lives.

Thanks

Very well written. I loved the story line, the action, the way you built up to everything and most of all the feeling you gave it. I found myself right there in his shoes thrilled with his granted wishes!!

This was a tale of Love that was simply enhanced by sex. Thanks for writing it.

So fucking hot!

I liked the story and trhe average Joe and not amazingly beautiful sister description but that each were hot to each other. I can tell so far you have them just exploring with each other and that they will not end up together which is a disappointment in the end. I hope that's not the case and can't wait to read the rest to see.

Yes, so well written and so damn hot ... I sure hope a sequel to this will be happening as you could picture the scenes and actions in your head so well. Certainly has had the desired affect and thank you !!

This journey of discovery is full of passion and I like the consideration each has for the other. I can think of no better compliment than to say this was very believable.

I loved story a bunch. I love the pace; almost the same as the feeling when young lovers are experimenting with the others bodies.

I can't believe Sue hasn't even mentioned birth control though. Incest pregnancies don't work for me; deformed or mentally deficient babies in any way just... Ugh.

"Bona fide Arabian Nights types", as a rule, don't have blond hair and blue eyes

Basement steps don't lead up to the second floor; they lead up to the first floor

want more

A lot of skill and thought went into this. It's one of the best I've read. Looking forward to chapters 7&8. In a way I can't help hoping their parents eventually catch them. Not to bring their love-making to an end but to make them see their own mistake in keeping them so restricted. I wonder, is it only men who find a story like this arousing, or does it turn any women or even any sisters on as well?

I gave this a well deserved 5. Very well written. Very believable; plausible. No stupid 11 inch cock bullcrap like most "juvenile" authors feel necessary. Your focus was on a story of teenagers experimenting and learning about and enjoying sex. The pace of the story was perfect, not a rush to a wham bam bunch of humping, but not dragged out either. A tight story line. I read some early remarks about him shaving her per her request. Real world today is that young women tend to shave, because it is "a cleaner look" and makes it more likely a guy will perform oral sex on her. I as a male prefer to be trimmed to about 3/4 inch public hair because women shouldn't have to get a mouth full of nature's dental floss, yet I still look like an adult male. Onto the next chapters.

Excellent and believable Story! The one thing that scafed me was the sex. In so many sexually repressed homes the idea of what creates babies is never discussed l. To get pregnant at that young age by a sibling would destroy her life, his life and the child if not damaged would be marked for life. So much

devastation for a few moments of enjoyment.

Just a quick line about her taking the pill to make her periods shorter and regular or something so those who care can relax . I know it’s fantasy, but your outstanding writing makes it so real.

Good until shave.

Love authors like me who believe hair good woman and doesn't interfere with oral adds to it

Bald girl

Pretty good start...

This has been one of my favorite fantasies for many years. 5 stars from me. I personally like women who have a thick delta of pubic hair. I think a full bush is sexy and fun to play amongst. It's also a natural lubricant. You touched on anal play briefly, but never returned to explore that eroticism. It could have been a way for them to fuck for the first time without risking getting Sue pregnant. Her inviting him to cum inside her without some type of birth control was irresponsible on both their parts. It's not like it was spur-of-the-moment, out-of-control sex. Sue planned for it, and Lewis surely hoped for it. A baby is forever.

awesome!!! One of the best I've read on this site.

Good writing. They are believeable. Went a bit too fast, I like the really slow seduction best. Foreplay is the most fun.

Warning!!!! You have just started reading an unfinished story from 2002. You may want to get out now!

Really well played by the author. Not having grown up with a sister in our home, I would like to believe this story is not a total fantasy. That is the beauty and thrill of humanity’s imagination.