All Comments on 'The Accidental Gigolo Pt. 03'

That was a really good one you pulled at the start of chapter 10. I won't spoil it for anyone reading the comments first :)

I have enjoyed this series. Excellent Write!

This has been a fun tale, but I'm still pissed at what you said about me in your "How to..." I don't know why I give you a 5 (Except that it's a damn good story).

This is real erotic, not the half page dribble seen so often on this site. Thanks for your stories and your talent.

This last one had a "gotta finish everything up" feel to it, but overall the entire story was outstanding. Loved every minute of it, surely it will be a Literotica classic.

You messed up including the mother. This story had so much possibility. Very poor ending.

When an anon that didn't read the story comments?

I diasgree completely with anonymous "ugh" - the ending was great (probably a waste of time to even acknowledge anon comments). Deedee was dysfunctional as a wife and a mom but reformed her ways after her attitude adjustment, which made for a good part of the fantasy.<p> I'd like to see this merry cast of horny characters continue - a few more pregnancies could be fun! Great writing.

Actually read it for the second time and Istill think it's incredibly funny and sexy. I just had to leave a comment.

I've read a lot on Literotica and can I say without a shadow of a doubt this is one of the best peices i have read here. It had everything, and was a good length. A*

This is as close as, possibly, the best.

One of the very best stories I've read on here for a while - so enjoyable from beginning to end and so full of humour and laughter and very entertaining. Well done - keep up the good work.

You have a delightful sense of humour an how nice to have a piece of literature that is a pleasure to read. Not having to read around gross grammar, illiterate spelling and a shallow plot raises this work way above a simple story. Will be reading everything else you can create. Brava, Brava

You Sir are one of my favourate Authors. This was a really hot and amazing story.

But what I would really like is if you continued Super Eros.

Kinda wished he woulda hate fucked his mom :/, but we don't all get what we wish for.

I just LOVED the whole series - a very good story, very well written

Thank you

Indeed, Sir! Thank you!!8

most excellent storyline ... DKP

That was fabulous. Keep writing like this.

Really really really really enjoyed this one!

very much enjoyed this entire series. thanks!

I enjoyed this way too much - thanks again!!

Men and Women Need Sex Anytime Anywhere and Any Age! Great Fun Story!

Great story. Couldn't stop until read the whole series. Just one suggestion- you could perhaps cut down a little on the description and increase the dialogues, of the sexy, dirty kind.

Delightful!

Great story, even better ending. I liked the way that bitch (mom) got sorted, a revenge fuck from her son would've sent me over the top. I'll definitely save this story and I'm looking forward to more of your work

Very good stroy,

I would have added terry and nat show the old man how to make a woman pass out

Just for the fun of it

I really enjoyed this story series. Liked the variety between Terry and each of the women.

Oscar for the best character has to go to the zucchini though, I actually burst out laughing when Pam offered it to Laura!! However, there were a few small errors in it but they didnt matter too much.

just a pity you turned him in to a bumbling fucking idiot...especially the last bit where his fucking bitch of a mother was going to have the wedding without him there...JUST HOW THE HELL CAN THAT HAPPEN...TOTALLY RUINED THE STORY ESPECIALLY AFTER WHAT HE HAD DONE TO HER...BY THEN HE SHOULD HAVE BEEN DICTATING WHAT HAPPENED...FOR ME THIS BEING A TOTAL WIMP RUINED THE WHOLE STORY...NEED TO CHANGE THE END

I had hoped Mom would have learned something

I don't often reread stories, but this one was worth it.

There were a couple of flubs with keeping the characters straight when the menage was taking place, but otherwise it was a grammatically clean read.

I think Terry should accidentally buy his mother a ball gag. Perhaps as a nice Mother's Day present. ;-)

I'd love to see a sequel where Terry gets to tryout Pam's lezzie lover, Maryanne Nelson. Maybe they approach him wanting a kid of their own?

just as much fun second/third time around

full of sex and the bit when his mother joined in was hilarious....but at least he tamed her...almost...still a bitch when suggesting they had the wedding without him...a damn good laugh,...really enjoyed it....just a pity he never fucked his mom but then dad might have wanted to fuck all three other women.,..

I am really sorry this one is over. I thoroughly enjoyed all parts of this story.

Great job. Thank you so much.

Over the years, I have read thousands of Literotica stories. A few were funny.

This one may be the funniest.

I didn't think American schools produced students who could write English this well.

Was this written by an Alien?

Paul in Oklahoma

Very well developed story and believable in the context of a erotica story, thank you.

I liked the story but more than that I liked how you wrote it. Funny and crazy at times. Didn't like the ending but I enjoyed it nonethless.

Ending was a bit rushed, I thought it could have gone another chapter or two but very funny and the dialog was great.

Funny, sexy, made me extremely horney and wish I was there.

It was great, but why let his bitch mother get in the last dig. If it weren't for that it would have been a 5.

Overall a great series.

But he should have taken mom too.

Loved this little series, even if a little far-fetched! The strip poker rules were a definite improvement! Nice work!

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Top Shelf series!

11/10!!!!!

Great story! Wish for more.

What an original, wonderful story! I truly loved it.

Hilarious original hot and really well written. An absolute gem of a series. What a treat for the readers. BardnotBard

What a great, entertaining and amusing series