by L.A. Wicker
...and, unlike so many others, you seem to have kept track of consequences without either banging us on the head with them or otherwise "killing the mood".
the story was great and the Direction was profound. Although I rate it as a c+ the writers ability to stimulate the mind is improveing . I have a sister who claims to be a wicker. I dont know but LA your writing is improveing.
damn I thought mom was gonna come in drugged out of her mind, see what she gave up and have a total breakdown. Then they could shove the bitch in the loony bin and go on with their lives. Did I say I thought she was a bitch. I hate women that don't take care of their men since I always end up listening to the sob story before I tell them to go find someone else to fuck.
Wish more description of what wearing or what seeing and less talking. So much talk, talk, talk simply lost interest.