by juanwildone
Juan, you're the man! It's a lovely little story. A clever and original concept that you've executed very well indeed. Definitely getting into my favorites list.
What a great idea, the author should continue with more of this storyline. It has really great potential! Very cheeky and funny!
You are very talented and need to keep on writing. Very novel and held my attention til the end.
I want to hear from everything in that room! The pillows, the shower (esp. hand sprayer), the bar of soap, mirrors - all of it!
This was a great story and so well written. Very witty. I saved it, I loved it. Please write some more
that would have been very erotic had i not been laughing so much, and it's 3am local time, so that no mean feat, well done! Can't wait to show the missus, I think she'll really like it.
I feel a bit guilty about some of our sheets now. Especially the one that is being used as a cover for the parrot's cage, having holes chewed in him...
A most unusual story - erotic (somewhat erratic) and definitely unexpected. Could have used a good edit (not volunteering dude!) and quotaion marks or Top/Bottom. Something.
Anyway, it was a good chuckle...and why did you stop writing?