All Comments on 'Training Ch. 03'

to be honest i cant decide how i feel about it. i kinda like it and especially liked the parts where anthony shows affection so that its not all so violent and brutal but it's your vision and no one elses. we're just here for the ride. good luck!

I am riveted and love parts, and I am uncomfortable with others. Still Anthony is a lucky bastard

Wonderfully done. The technical end of this writing is very good. I don't have a problem with a stern taskmaster at all, just a bit heavy on the rape even though it was her fantasy, they were on their honeymoon - a lil luv - ?

I enjoyed reading this a lot. The details, the imagery, everything is extremely well done. The only little problem is that I would've loved Eileen's lines to be more varied. The fact that she kept repeating "You have no right" over and over again between Anthony's long monologues just isn't enough for me, personally. But that's just my opinion.

Thank you for sharing this with us, you're very talented.

My husband and I role play this kind of thing a lot, and you have just given us WONDERFUL ideas for it. It's a really well-written story, and very hottt!

My only complaint is that she would periodically remember her "pirate fantasy." I can't imagine someone thinking about a "rape" fantasy while she's being "trained." I can see that he can keep referencing that to humiliate her, but when she's lying on the floor, all tied up, it just seemed kind of odd that she'd think of the pirates.

However, like everyone else said, this is your vision, and who am I to say it's not right? You did an excellent job. Truly believe you should write stories for profit (if you don't already!) Best wishes, and THANK YOU!!

This is a most delicious story! I would so love to be her and to have a man with the skill and desire to want to train his wife and educate her about her own body. Looking forward to reading more.

Please add another chapter. or begin a new story.

I would purchase any erotica you wrote. Thank you.

The best story on the site! I hope you write more, so pls let us know if you do I would buy them. I will check your site once in a while to look. Thanks for sharing Eileen's story with us

When I think about this I get oddly reminded of Lepard30, he's the gentlemen that creates audios of a. Demanding nature. Though as I read this I'm still rooting for her to get away, even though t turns me on.

EL James has absolutely nothing on you.

this is totally BDSM, move it in its right place

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and very erotic. But who and what is Dr, Moreland and what does he have to do with all of this? Weird ending

This story never fails to make me come. Whenever I'm feeling really horny, I just sit down and read this story. Great job. :) Also, to the person who said to move this story into the right category, it is. While it is BDSM, it is also non-consent because she doesn't (admit to) want it.

MMM

I love this whole series. I could never (I don't think) go for this in rl, but as a fantasy, this is HOT! He never runs out of ideas- it's like one big roller coaster ride! And he's so cold about how he treats her. He almost seems psychopathic. He truly does treat her like a slave. But it's so hot because, being bound all the time, she has no choice. He makes her body respond and she can't help it. Makes me wonder if the same thing could happen to me! I agree with another commenter in one regard...Eileen's dialogue has gotten very old. I wish he'd just keep the gag in her mouth sometimes! lol. Thanks for writing these stories!

I'm totally in love with this story and almost every element of it. The only thing I would say is to give Eileen a little more variability in her protests; her personality is very vague in comparison to how strong her husband's character is. But the balance of rape and love is so perfect! I really love this!

I read this series every year and it never fails to arouse and please. Thank you Turtle Writes I would love to see what else your mind could come up with.

i AM A SISSY CROSSDRESSING SLUT I would love to be trained like that . training me ot deep throat and make my ass take what ever any one would love to have entered me .candy selma holes .candysl@hotmail.com. any one come to alberta canada and needs a a sex slave to train for how ever long you are here . drop me a line

Not to be rude but in this sentence,

"You mean the butt plug shoved up your ass that's holding all my come in?"

the word come should be spelled cum.

Again not to be rude but I tend to be a spelling Nazi sometimes. And this word is not spelled correctly

But on the other hand Fantastic story.

Best stories on lit! i read every year

i love BDSM and Non consensual erotica on lit...but guess the first time i'm inclined to wrte.......:/ about 61333 or so people saw this lit work of yours......as per data flashing on lit.... only 188 or so have posted likes.....and only 23 or so have commented......so you see.....there are thousands who dont love such depraved and perverse torture and humiliation of their own wives or of women despite fondness for BDSM and non consent sex...and i'm ecstatic to send in writing that i find this depraved with a capital D and perverse and psycho with a capital P!!!!....these might be kinds of things over frustrated,ugly old men.....(whose looks' ugliness might put the Hunchback of Notre Dame to shame......and who are carefully avoided by women all ages...and even by men;)...) fantasize,mr. turtle writes!!!!:/

My favourite story ever.. All of this series. Love it

First off, I have enjoyed this story, never mind the feelings of repulsion that are also there. The story is intriguing and I certainly will read on, to discover how it continues.

You might look at it as pure abuse. You certainly must realise it's a fantasy. And it is also meta writing to reflect why so many of us women have these fantasies, to escape from the duress a society focused on sex but at the other hand so quick to throw the 'slut reproach', puts on us. It would be a liberation if these fantasies were no longer needed, but at the same time that would be an impoverishment of our spirits and souls.

And of course the story can also be looked upon as a uninhibited description of a psychological experiment to liberate Eileen from the restraining concepts of sluttiness that were carefully put there by her mother and society at large.

I really couldn’t have voiced my opinion much better. The only way I was able to read this far into the story is because it’s clearly unrealistic, the husband is a sadistic sociopath and seems to be completely without any redeeming features (oh well apparently he’s handsome according to his wife). If there was ANY realism she would have left him by now. That said the sex is highly charged and erotic it’s just the way he actually treats her that makes him an utter bastard. I read this chapter by accident I meant to select chapter 2, so despite the facts that it’s a story, yes it is erotic in places and clearly written as a fantasy I’m ditching it here because I don’t see any hope for him at all. She’s probably going to end up enjoying all the assorted sex awesome for her because hey sex is amazing but she’s still going to have the shame and humiliation that goes along with it. He however is still going to be a deranged prick who doesn’t actually care about her at all. Sexual enlightenment is meant to be liberating it should be SAFE, SANE and FUCKING CONSENSUAL. By humiliating her he’s adhering to the stereotype that he’s trying to break her out of, arsehole.

Clearly she’s been brainwashed as a kid into the “good girls don’t do that” mindset and quite frankly it’s tragic. Is it any wonder that so many women have “rape” type fantasies? Society has demonised women for the last 2,000+ years it’s easy to see why the rape fantasy is prolific because people have been trained to believe that a woman shouldn’t enjoy sex. If she’s tied down and forced then she is free from blame.

Pretty sad really because if a woman does orgasm during an actual rape (easily done it’s a physiological response designed to protect her body from damage) the guilt is piled right back on by everyone not just herself.

This is the most well-written story I have ever read on this site. Erotica worth publishing. Well done!

S.

If BDSM isn't your cup of tea don't read it, nothing is gained by negativity to those that enjoy it and write it well.

That's all

But agree her lines could be more variable.

To an anonymous commenter: “If there was ANY realism she would have left him by now.”. Oh please. You call him sadistic psychopath, but it’s a work of fiction. If you going to judge him so seriously then you should acknowledge that the girl is a mere sheep who can’t say anything more complicated than “no, stop” or “why are you doing that”. If there were ANY realism he would have dropped her by now and found someone smarter and more willing. So they found each other.

So why are you reading it? More specifically, why are you reading Chapter 3?

who fucked her ass? anthony or bellboy

guess for 2 weeks she was never allowed to use a bathroom, especially first thing in the morning. just a bunch of sadistic thoughts

I wish he could teach all men how to kiss!

great story so far, i little long,,

So far fetched but very good, well thought out plot very nice characters and great descriptions

I would love a new life as a man’s sex slave❤️❤️

Interesting. No food, shaving, bathing (or little), a few added things would make a big difference.

Even sluts need to be clean.

How did he keep the bride away from here mama for 2 weeks let alone 2 hours without having mama call the bobbies?. Think.