All Comments on 'Unleashed Desires, Ageless Passions Ch. 02'

by JonOwens

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coaster2coaster2almost 17 years ago
Beautifully written

Like Chapter One, a perfect examination of mature lovers. The thoughtful, analytical Rosie and her conflicted John. The pace is perfect and the descriptions are lyrical. I eagerly await more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A fine point

Dear Mr. Owens,

Your writing, Unleashed Desires, Ageless Passion 1/2 was absolutely spot on. Having walked the same trail, though unfettered by marriage bonds, I am amazed at how accurately you limned the feelings, and passions, I too experienced. Absolutely marvelous to relive the moments again through your words.

Regards, Jon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I wish that would happen to me

Wow, I wish I could find a lady like that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Simply stunning!

I thought chapter 1 was great. This is brilliant! What I really enjoy about your stories is that your characters are so evocative of real people, not just genitalia on legs like so many stories here!

I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 3. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
One of the best!

As a mature woman reader, I loved this story. Your descriptions are poetic. Your characters have warmth, intelligence and charm, particularly Rosie - a real gem! The sex sizzles from the page. I hope there's a chapter 3...and 4 and 5 and 6 for that matter. Just wonderful! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Magnifique!

Cette histoire est si bonne que je veux être Rosie. Je n'ai jamais été baisé comme ça. J'aime votre écriture.

Sophie x

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot! Hot! Hot!

You really capture sensuality and sexual passion in your writing. I love that it's so tastefully done but downright rude and dirty as well, just like sex should be! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
this story is right on time.

this story is right on time with my situation in life. Needing a women of rosies caliber regarding lust, passions, and true love!

oldtwitoldtwit11 months ago

Still good, nice second part

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