by JonOwens
Like Chapter One, a perfect examination of mature lovers. The thoughtful, analytical Rosie and her conflicted John. The pace is perfect and the descriptions are lyrical. I eagerly await more.
Dear Mr. Owens,
Your writing, Unleashed Desires, Ageless Passion 1/2 was absolutely spot on. Having walked the same trail, though unfettered by marriage bonds, I am amazed at how accurately you limned the feelings, and passions, I too experienced. Absolutely marvelous to relive the moments again through your words.
Regards, Jon
Wow, I wish I could find a lady like that.
I thought chapter 1 was great. This is brilliant! What I really enjoy about your stories is that your characters are so evocative of real people, not just genitalia on legs like so many stories here!
I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 3. Keep writing!
As a mature woman reader, I loved this story. Your descriptions are poetic. Your characters have warmth, intelligence and charm, particularly Rosie - a real gem! The sex sizzles from the page. I hope there's a chapter 3...and 4 and 5 and 6 for that matter. Just wonderful! Thank you.
Cette histoire est si bonne que je veux être Rosie. Je n'ai jamais été baisé comme ça. J'aime votre écriture.
Sophie x
You really capture sensuality and sexual passion in your writing. I love that it's so tastefully done but downright rude and dirty as well, just like sex should be! Well done!
this story is right on time with my situation in life. Needing a women of rosies caliber regarding lust, passions, and true love!