All Comments on 'Visiting The Girls Of Amsterdam'

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Sandhills50Sandhills50over 12 years ago
Bravo

Well done! Excellent reading. Now, do we learn of Bunkie's experience with Galena in the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
an enjoyable read

Look forward to reading about his visit the next day with Galena.

One note I thought Pieter was a cousin You had him as a nephew in places. Just my 2 cents.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 12 years ago
Found it hard to read

Found it hard to read, so I stopped after the first three paragraphs.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
An exceptionally fine piece

and deliciously arousing. Thank you.

OleguyOleguyover 10 years ago
You do it so well !

Wasn't he lucky getting a barely broken in lass with such consideration/

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 10 years ago
Bunkie has a good time

I really enjoyed your story. The Dutch (and most Europeans) have a much better attitude about sex than we do in the States. Too bad we don't think like them.

Great story--looking forward to the next chapter.

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