All Comments on 'Deserving'

by MsMantis

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Bad Girl

You are sooo Good at being a Bad Girl.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
And You Diserve This One (Pbut In A Good Way).....

1= I find your background or the lack of a little bland. 2=I do love how you left it to the imagination of who she is supposed to be. Is she a 18yo or a MILF or a Ebony? Who knows? The answer it's up for us the observer to discover that for our selfs, the same goes for the story and why is she always being beaten to even the question does she likes it. 3= She needs more color and details 4= The bright side is that is a good hand drawing. 5 = In concluion I love how you leave it all up to the imagination, I know what I said about the lack of background. You see with a background it would make the pictoure a lot prettier. You know visuly.

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