by My Erotic Tale
Im getting addicted to these Art. Keep up the story-telling charms, its magical :)
have to wait til I have more time to ponder the long writes ..but this reads so smooth...I shall pass this on to my dear cherokee friend whitewolf.she'd be blessed...take care/blue
not for hearts, but for the next chapter of our Cherokee rose. <wink> Art, you are truly the poet fable creator! And I am so deeply honored that you have invited Me to help in My small way with the remaining chapters to this Indian epic - thank you, "Fable Man"!!! <grin>
Vixxx
I love it ...but you know that since i read it before you submitted it! LOL don't stop with the next one...though...keep it going...
only you can make a poem tell a full story! great work Art!
Kisses,
T
This is so GOOD!! It is the best yet!!! I like it so much when you write about the Cherokee Rose. It is so easy to understand and so good in feeling!!! Thank you Zen Master Art for sharing so much of your insite!!! 5 is not high as it should be!!!
this was a very engaging passage and only keeps getting better.
vote on this installment. it's a smooth read. i'm thinking that since this is about hunting hearts, i've detected a slight alteration in mood, especially since the hunting is proving that it isn't as easy to get as thought. great read art!!.......don
The epic continues,
the tale's well told;
with love and lust
and turning cold
and warmth restored
with lust anew
A rose is a rose is a rose...except for Cherokee Rose, she is something else. No time to write anymore, must read next installment.