All Comments on 'A Devilish Rose: the treat'

And here we see

the Rose does bloom,

under the care

of a lustful gardener.

Gardening can be such a 'hard' job,

but somebody's got to do it...

my minds eye read kilt in the last verse and had to re read...nicely penned...pen on of devil of the inkwell...blue

and this is what i'm picking out as my favorite:

Bone and flesh in loves clashing thrusts

sweat and fire in the kiln of a body in lust

released is the warmth in a deep dark hole

biting into hell, tasting a Devilish Rose.

*****

nicely done and flows nicely.....don

you're a very funny very naughty boy Arty!

;)

But then...I already knew that didn't I!

LOL

GREAT JOB!