All Comments on 'A Pecos Rose: The cards get laid'

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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
nice deal......

"What can I offer as an alternative wager,

my funds are depleted or lay on the table"

A smile went across Lady Lilleys face that glow

The Gambler smiled back at a Pecos Rose.

and i'm thinking that second line needs this - do i - after the word or. this is my fav stanza with that second line. nicely done art.....don

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Interesting~

I like where this is goin. I can never get over how you make this flow so well. Great job here Art.

Very interested in what Comes (I resistede temptaion, ya saw that right. Grinnin *) next.

More Please~

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