All Comments on 'A Winter Equality'

winter words! Mentioned in today's review

Wonderful job drawing the reader in as well as word choice.

I grow weary, waiting,

equal with winter’s everything. <--great ending lines!

The spare language, the stark images; all work to create a wonderfully evocative piece. Excellent, Foehn!

Stark drabness of winter;

Awaiting the return of life ...

Perhaps.

Winter seems dull and lifeless ~ I await the sunshine of spring.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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only contain one side from the other. TK U MLJ LV NV