All Comments on 'A Yellow Rose: boots over sawdust'

Another part of your Yellow Rose tale;

well told as usual. Just one item of note:

think you meant clumsily instead at the end

of the first stanza.........

I like these. They are a little forced in my mind and

that costs the work rhythm. The story is visual and

a great read. It's like an A and C grade for a B- or

C plus. sandspike

The tale I loved and I enjoy the intrigue that you build with anticipation of what will happen next. BUT... send me the damn thing to spell check first~~~LOL...

blessings

du~

This rendering gives me the impression ~ I'm reading a Western novel. Great concept.