All Comments on 'A Yellow Rose: Dance card's full'

well written with great imagry.

Yes, I admit I am a BIG fan !!!

I love all your poetry

and this one is just magical.

The flow is smooth, it captures

the reader, pulls them into

... the dance.

Just love your wording ...

painting of the Yellow Rose ~

side note ~ The yellow rose is my fav. colored rose.

So me thinks ya could neva go wrong with that .. Yumm !

my comments on these long writes to my ability to concentrate long nuff to envision the thought...so my favorite line was this...

Two in tune with one another's moves

hands like feathers in finger grooves

escalating heart rate as the song slowed

dancing with elegance, A Yellow Rose.

the dance...makes me smile...blue

So vividly flowing,

the dancers you paint.

Enjoyable to the point ~ you almost feel as if you're there with them.