All Comments on 'Ablution'

Rebirth, thats what this reminded me of.

it was written as a response to a friends poem about feeling down, bruised, abused, bleeding. good to see you. I had forgotten I offered this. :o

the continuity of the long drawn out eee sounds throughout does two things for me as i read this: first, they link it all together, knit it into one piece - and, secondly, it works on my mind as a long drawn breath, an exhalation... a letting go of the heavy, troubling, stressful. a very calming, healing feel to this, harry.

That normally scr"ee"ms at you peaceful?

Some of the sonic work you do really amazes me.

Beautiful poem, Harry. Each stanza develops a little idea, carries a little mood encapsulated. I really have nothing to add or remove from this one, it's perfect.