All Comments on 'Accepting Pain'

by Brittni4u

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 4 years ago
Mistakes, I've made!

I've hurt! I've been hurt! The latter is easier to abide. I can forgive. The former hurts more. I need to be forgiven. It does not happen. That is the ache to make me wiser and the one that never goes away. A poem to remember! Well done. Five stars.

redkissyredkissyabout 4 years ago
Deep

That is so sad but true.

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67about 4 years ago
Inspirational and Poigniant

Insightful. If we are to heal we need to let go of that "rock" as the Zen parable goes. We need to grow and move on. Its how we mend ourselves.

Skye_subSkye_subabout 4 years ago
Pertinent to us all

Great work babe. No matter what our struggles; we can choose to rise or we can choose to be beat down. We may not always succeed but it is always worth it to fight. Without pain; can we even recognize joy?

I love you 😘

Jayded_LustJayded_Lustabout 4 years ago
only time will heal

I tried to holla at you Britt, after your last story, but your email was deactivated. I hope you are doing ok.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Beautiful

Such a wonderful poem. Really poignant, uplifting and inspiring. Beautiful visuals and great rhymes. Indeed, we all go through difficult times, and there are times when it seems that there is no hope. But there always is, and nothing bad lasts forever. My favorite part was: "Balance between light and dark,

Extreme ends you never stray.

Compromises leading your mark,

Listen to what you have to say.

Accept the hurt, embrace the ache,

All feelings are your friend.

A better day shall you make,

Then victory shall be your end."

Beautiful. Keep up the great work. You are very talented. Looking forward to your next work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Thank you

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