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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 14 years ago
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Absolutely frightening. I don't see how anyone reading this could not enter her world. The repetition of the first line in the last with its climatic variation had a profound effect upon me as well as the repetition of the infinitive phrases that felt like a heartbeat struggling to persist.

TzaraTzaraover 14 years ago
I would echo what GM said.

Nice use of form, and the repetition of the first line as the last is not only an elegant feature, it seems to give a sense of closure to the poem.

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