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by Middleagepoet

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YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Tongue in "hot flesh" of cheek?

"hard throbbing"

"liquid center"

You use quite a few hackneyed phrases in this poem.

So many that it seems intentional considering your other work.

Are you trying camp humor?

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A PICTURE SHOULD TELL A TALE

a poem should show a dream. TK U MLJ LV NV

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