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by Willow Rain

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flyguy69flyguy69about 19 years ago
Nice

Some beautiful sentiment candidly expressed. I wondered about some of the line breaks; so you mean for a reader to pause at each of them?

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
cool down....

is always nice after some hot wax....loved the imagery that is displayed. nice job!!.......don

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