by Liar
The perfect juxtapose - symphonic music and love making works so well in this delicate poem. Moving and lyrical.
Just beautiful! He makes describing the undescribable look easy.
ssong
this is written with such observation and specificity. The way it moves neatly from one observation to the next keeps it from falling into hyperbole (an easy thing with a poem on a topic like this), but in the hands of this articulate poet it is as subtle and delicate as lace. :)
This is beyond wonderful; and the reason I know I will never be a true Wordsmith. Thank you, Liar... I love it!
Exquisite writing perfectly descriptive of the aftermath of a wonderful sensuous interlude. Perfection.