by My Erotic Tale
The stacatto rhythm of your lines and rhyme are entertaining and very good. Now, perhaps you can explore the more ballad-like story poems of EA Poe or Robert Service? I'm sure you would make some wonderful odes.
How much more can she endure. I loved this one too. A very differ ring to it, and yet..
She takes it all in stride and goes on. This is one tough lady. Love her courage and determination. I just seeem to think somehow.. she loves this life..even after all she has ben thru.
Just my opinion. More I say..
Have to know what happens next to this cheeky lil broad.(grins)
Every one of these are written with Art's flare. Which is fascinating and entertaining.