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tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Ok Art....

since I feel I have to pick on something...spelling...otherwise, once again...wonderful.

AnnoraAnnoraover 19 years ago
Another work of Art,,,

Spelling or not its a fabulous read. One must enjoy how your enthusiasm catches you so you write it down.. How it comes to you.

Bravo Bravo

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Inner workings

Art...

I read the last three of these. I feel the emptiness of Laura the "debauch" of a soul. A thirst unquenched. A dull sadness that drives her into the daily living of her life. Spelling...were you not totally connected to this piece? I also felt that this one did not flow as easily for you, not the rich depth of the passionate revelations of the others...but then again I like that..edging! On the verge of realms still to be delved into... still it was good! A sign of a good writer..

Du Lac

sacksackover 19 years ago
"for your troubles whore-a"

A stroke of genius and my favorite of the set so far. Bravo!

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
Wonderful~

The sun set lower than low

across the mile a candle's glow

waiting for the knock at the door

at the threshold of Lady Laura~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Thes lines tell it all~~!!

Wow..Still holding us in the palm of your hand on this series. Loved the Imagery (again) and a lil humor I see here.

Dare we ask for More? (smiles)

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