by My Erotic Tale
since I feel I have to pick on something...spelling...otherwise, once again...wonderful.
Spelling or not its a fabulous read. One must enjoy how your enthusiasm catches you so you write it down.. How it comes to you.
Bravo Bravo
Art...
I read the last three of these. I feel the emptiness of Laura the "debauch" of a soul. A thirst unquenched. A dull sadness that drives her into the daily living of her life. Spelling...were you not totally connected to this piece? I also felt that this one did not flow as easily for you, not the rich depth of the passionate revelations of the others...but then again I like that..edging! On the verge of realms still to be delved into... still it was good! A sign of a good writer..
Du Lac
A stroke of genius and my favorite of the set so far. Bravo!
The sun set lower than low
across the mile a candle's glow
waiting for the knock at the door
at the threshold of Lady Laura~
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Thes lines tell it all~~!!
Wow..Still holding us in the palm of your hand on this series. Loved the Imagery (again) and a lil humor I see here.
Dare we ask for More? (smiles)