All Comments on 'Ambush'

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 16 years ago
gripping....

I enjoyed your poetic pen... (~_~)

WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
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Ha! Very smart and funny.

wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 16 years ago
great!

there is a depth of sadness in here that isn't foremost (judging by other's comments) but i felt it in the first word. the title really works well. excellent imagery. keep sharing your poetry, i'm enjoying reading it and learning.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Never had this sort of problem with my favortie munchy, but then your words done so well are open to imaginative interpretation.

shereadsshereadsover 16 years ago
These four words

The saddest words anyone can say, and the most devastating to hear: "WHEN I LOVED YOU."

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Funny?

The thing I love about your poetry is.....I have to think about it....and often have to read the lines again and again. I think AMBUSH means you didn't know you were in a dangerous (toxic) love affair and you got screwed (not in the hot fun way) by someone. Not only that but after you gave and gave you were left frustrated and wanting. BTW, The name of the poem is a great play on words. My take on this work is probably way off, but I find it fun to speculate. Leighlilly

Artificial_IArtificial_Iabout 16 years ago
LOL

...good one. All too familiar...

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