All Comments on 'Amnesia'

... I seek out your poems but this one doesn't grab me.

I am not one to make negative comments (not that THIS is negative) without an explanation. I think it's the sporadic rhyme, for me it detracts from your usual passion.

Tess - with the best intentions

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread "New Poems Reviews" for Saturday 14, 2006

thanks for the journey

Art~

I loved the first stanza, such vibrant images.

This spurred me to

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But, I forgot what it was.

Evidently this person forgot to remember to forget.