All Comments on 'Angeline Is Joy'

never get tired contemplating her genius! I agree...smiles/bluerains

Absolutely beautiful! I'm sure she's gonna love this.

Flawless.

to another writer. wonderful imagery and the setup i've never seen before adds to its lustre. superbly done sack......don

Ya gotta love this poem~!!

I love the way you set it up.

Your wording is pure *poetry*..

Great poem Sack.

I think she is gonna love this too.

Wonderfully said~!

Nice Sack! Creative and wonderful! Welcome back have missed you!

du lac~

sack,

if you are going to pander, do it a little less obliviously,

No caps, and bolds on the ends. Let the reader discover.

Some of these lines, how do I say? Suck.

"Imaginative, richer yet in my mind's "I"" a cliche compounded by a bad pun, and of course the bold "I" drawing attension to it. Always let the reader discover your bad puns.

On the other hand:

"Angeline is joy, the dulcet eternal ariA

Naiad of enchanting waters, child of suN"

is not a bad opening, first line is quite nice, second while seeming a bit dated, fits rather well with the first.

No need to pander, 12/1, I don't need anything from Angeline, and in return, she doesn't owe me anything. Why do you insist on putting an ulterior motive "spin" on some of my tribute pieces?

The bold beginning and end letters of each line simply outline the double acrostic, it has nothing to do with point making or chest thumping. I thought that was obvious...

Mine was the first one--I don't know why it didn't show. And, yes, I was sort of embarrassed, Sack, by the tribute. :)

On the other hand, anything *I* can do to make someone else write a double acrostic is pretty cool. To me it's what poetry is about. Judo taught me to write them and it appears I've taught you, so the circle is complete.

Now you have to teach someone. xo, Ange

I really enjoyed reading this poem. What a great dedication to someone you truly care about..

~Honey

After reading this poem one feels as if he has been allowed into a secret little fan club devoted to a very special person ~ Angeline. How good and pleasant it is to see such appreciation for another.

Nicely done double acrostic to our very own Angeline.

that it took splashes of brilliance to complete this poem. Sack you're a damn Genius.