All Comments on 'Angeline is Life'

Correction Sack, I said the first two lines where quite nice, and that some of them suck, pointing out one. This time you have a better proporation. I think you have three here that would be better if they weren't forced, but what the hell, none are as odious as the one I pointed out previously.

These are the three, I have a minor objection to:

Infinitely lovely, a mIllionth place of pI

Intensely fervent or as sImple as do-re-mI

Inspiring genius, always willIng to say "hI"

They are either out of place or not up to the rest.

These are quite nice also:

Evanescent fairy dEw in a woodland grovE

Lifting, lifting, Like a diaphanous veiL

Eloquently spun talEs of half whispered lovE

although I would have dropped "half" in that line.

in areas where i am not. i try at times, but i'm not always successful at it. i do agree with 1201 with lines choesn as very nice. i do have one though that i have to speak out for before anyone else does as the one that stands out tome, and it is this one:

Inspiring genius, always willIng to say "hI"

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again.....a nice tribute piece to a writer......don

I feel sorta the opposite of life this morning, having worked a long day yesterday,then gone to a basketball game--and now back to more work. I think we need a quadruple acrostic called "Angeline is tired." Ok? :)

Thank you again, Sack. A triple acrostic! I'm telling Judo on you.

Who was it that said, - "I may not know Art ~ but I know what I like..." The same feeling exist in the rendering of this amazing work. Simply put: I liked it!

Holy triple acrostic!!!

Not satisfied with a mere double,

You manage to praise yourself as well as our own Angeline With this triple piece acrostic!