by Liar
Those first two stanzas are fantastic.
Also:
"spanning from history
to hysteria?"
Very original and good read.
....these words very much. Very original and very well-handled.
I enjoyed watching this one grow. I truely liked the word play with this one. Mezmerizing!
I truly enjoy that you write about the universe and this one is just awesome.I especially like the images I got from this part..
Titans in clashed
tectonic tension,
as granite, as gold,
I can just feel the plates a moving as they clashed :) great work!!
...this morning on my first run-through and couldn't think how to comment. I've read it several times, each time finding a new angles, new images. It's intensely erotic and beautifully written. Five.