All Comments on 'Awake'

A loss more distant in memory — the pain has faded and now it's time to move on.

"You, just ashes on my pillowcase-/and today is laundry day."

such a strong image, and finally as if picking itself up by the boot straps, finding the power to be optimistic. I need this kind of poems next to me.

i love the way you say things, without actually saying them. whether you leave us to read between the lines, or use a metaphor. ".....just ashes on my pillow case - and today is laundry day." kinda cut-throat. i luv it!