All Comments on 'Away from it all'

Quite a ride, demure.

Trains really exert a fascination on writers , poets , film makers , readers , viewers .....everybody ---- really a train journey is very exciting once in a while , if one is not a frequent traveller ---- we have local trains here in Mumbai which is tge lifeline of Mumbai ! 5-ed.

With a steady and pulsing rhythm that feels much like cruising along in a steaming engine. I like the flow and feel of this. Also, 'drat' isn't used as much as it should be these days.

A very nice poem. Great locomotion. I have a bit of a poetry in motion fetish. This sated me well. Excellent.