All Comments on 'Bee's Knees'

Vibrant ~ a great read but that HAS to be a typo in the last verse. If not, I don't get it. :-D

I would lose that word. You don't need it and I think it detracts from the overall joy of the poem. - I am a sucker for alliteration by the way.

Wow, it punched me, I love it! The whole thing is perfect, I especially appreciated the odd twist on words and the catchy, jazzy rythm. Lick my lips!

If the rest of the lady pictured looks as beautiful as her legs ~ I'd say she really is the bee's knees ~ and one hell of a groovy chick.

Alliteration overload and I like the way you show so subtly the intoxication progression of the night.

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located between the knees. TK U MLJ LV NV

Really soomth, like cover with the honey.