All Comments on 'beginning again'

Well portrayed variety of emotions at the end of one thing and the beginning of another. Thank you

Hugo

the view of earth from a plane seems like a store window at christmas with tiny houses and cars <grin..a very good description of flying <grin...I enjoyed your write

Capturing that feeling of transition and using the metaphoric and literal journey to do so. The changes so often happen in ways and times we are not expecting. Journeys have so often been more about beginnings for me then they have been about endings.

I really enjoyed this ride, your phrasing is unique and interesting. Very inventive. Thanks for sharing your talents with us--

annaswirls

Like Christmas under the tree

enjoin your rite <winkz

Anyone whose fear is that of traveling by plane will readily relate to what sophia's saying here. But notice, she did land safely.

a circle... beginning or end. This is lovely.

A feeling of being suspended in time ~ until the wheels touch the tarmac ~ then life begins again.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.

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