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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
mentioned.....

...in the review thread.

Tess

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
*Grins*

I'm with you my friend.

Just wait, be patient for the berry next time. *lol*

I loved your wording~imagery and flow.

Cute lil poem here Art~

More Please~

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
direction...

is what i'm pulling out of this piece. that means when one is tangled up and just not sure. now that is found it has everything to do with the title......nice job art......don

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
One day...

it will not be the one berry you will reach in your hunger -it will be the entire bush you will feast upon, mi amigo. <smile> This was a new facet of your talents that I read this morning, Art; a touch of zen at first felt and that led Me then into the subtleties of a thought provoking message. This was a nice change up for Me to see coming from your pen... and I very much enjoyed it!!!

Vixxx

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
~~

Yet another from the mind of Zen;

are you never tired or out of gas?

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
I love the thought

that you provoke in your writes, gives meaning to new images.. and leaves inspiring words to roll across my tongue.. thank you for the read !! sweetGApeaches

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Risky.

A most unfortunate trip to the Woods ~ assailed by all manner of woodland perils.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHEN ON A TREK IN THE JUNGLE

the boy scout motto is available, TK U MLJ LV NV

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