All Comments on 'bleeding love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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a friend told me to check out your work, but I have been too lazy to look up your name, kept spelling it wrong, but thank goodness you have a new one out today! And I see what she means. Nice write! I will have to go read the rest.

Welcome, a bit late, but new to me :)

~annaswirls

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I've enjoyed your work as well

Keep them coming. :)

Curiouswife

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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"the halfstuffed scarecrow

laying in the hallway

strewn and strawn"

I love the words 'strewn and strawn'. They just whirl around inside my head like a dervish.

"With memories

I dare not keep."

Soulfull. That's all.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A good read on several levels

But the part I liked was one I invented,

The lament of the scarecrow over the loss of Dorothy.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
PUTTING THINGS BACK TOGETHER

even humpty didnt succeed with assistants, TK U MLJ LV NV

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