All Comments on 'Blue Skies'

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DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
I like this

Two lines that are straight forward and in thought and language - with a predictable association (to heaven). And then the last line: full of contractions and alternative spellings, and a conclusion that is not what one would expect. It makes you wonder why the exception: because in heaven he would not be conscious of the sight? That being dead wouldn't be "heavenly"? That he doesn't belong in heaven? Or something else entirely? Hmmmm....and all in three lines!

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
one more thought

Capitalization on Blue Skies: is this a reference to the song, I wonder? Which is rather hoppy happy like.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A CHANGE IN LIFE

will alter thinking and perception, TK U MLJ LV NV

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
a nice idea -

I do get a little confused by the double negation (except + not)

LoganseroticaLoganseroticaalmost 11 years ago
I see

Why you hate on me lol

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