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by MagicaPractica

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oregon_galoregon_galover 16 years ago
sweet!

i liked how you got to the point. sweet write!

damppantiesdamppantiesover 16 years ago
Superb.

Oh, this is the best of your poems till date, definitely.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
The kind of woman I like!

Hurt but not broken or defeated; I love it. And you showed it rather than described. Bravo!

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I'm a passionate, married, BBW looking for an outlet for my writing. I've written quite a few stories of varying degrees of quality over all the categories. I hope you find something you like.

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