All Comments on 'Brotherly love'

had EVER come into MY room like that, I would have been the only one leaving alive!! but the last lines say so very much...dressed in guilt and shame. yeah, I have worn those clinging tacky garments before, it sucks..thanks for this poem :)

...taboo, handled with the pen of a poet whose control is growing by the day. Each piece of yours I read grows sharper, cleaner of line and word. This poet's voice is growing...expanding quickly!

But I question this being placed under Erotic. Even though it has mature subject matter, I still see it as non erotic, without any real pleasure. This is painful poem handled very well.

...a tricky subject. (looks around for a rant from anonymous)

for an encore. TK U MLJ LV NV