All Comments on 'cat’s eye'

get into it, fuck her on the floor in front of everyone, taste her nastiness; otherwise some lines in poem need rework

and trying to distinguish between content (which I find almost upsetting, and absolutely seething) and craft. Is the narrator a cat, a jealous woman, a man? Whatever the case, it's powerful.

never let YOUR OWN SELF be derogatory. YOU ARE YOURSELF BE PROUD AND WITH YOUR OWN WORTH, tk u mlj lv nv