All Comments on 'Chant of Seasons'

A nice beat here

to time's seasons;

in the cold, still upbeat

with snuggling and cuddling.

Your poem is mentioned in the new poems review thread.

nature as this has a pulse of time...pen on...smiles/blue

what can I say?

The time of harvest and slumber of old

turning leaves red and gold.

800 years ago, it would have been nice

I don't think the saxons where using rhyming couplets though

Today , in this year my friend,

I believe it is still NICE.

A turning of seasons, and I

really like it ...

-sGp-

The rhythm of life in the season of time.