by matriarch
Well done matri. Beautiful poem by a beautiful woman about a beautiful woman.
Wonderful poem. All of your poetry is so inventive and heartfelt. And it is so nice to be able to comment here and let you know it. Please continue with your elegant words. I will, no doubt, make it a point to enjoy each and every one.
~lucky
Beautiful words. Conjured up such a delightfully different atmosphere... I think I like that world. :)
Truly shows her essence, and I love how special and personal you made this for her.
I'm sure she loves it. ;-)
I love this poem because it is so gentle. The use of language, the imagery it creates... just marvelous! And-- just because I'm curious I have to ask-- is that Cherokee?
What a load of crap! I mean, excrement. Um, doo doo?
No -- I mean, it's absolutely lovely.