All Comments on 'Colorado Calling'

Good one!

ps, you can spell out "bitch" instead of using asterisks ***

Oh damn...not sure how that happened...yeah, it should have been spelled out...I think I may have copied and pasted this from a site that did that, it was not my intent btw...

Thanks for pointing that out though...and thanks for reading...

Cheers,

Alan.

PS: A gal on another site wrote a great response to this poem...note that she used the same end rhymes...she put a bit of work into this one btw...

http://www.storiesspace.com/stories/poetry/jersey-rejoicing.aspx