All Comments on 'Cup'

your poem was mentioned on the thread

'New Poems Reviews'

Really enjoyed this one,

A great read.

thanks.

~ J

Cleverly written but "hath runneth" jars to me .It sounds a bit better if hath is pronounced has, as some say it should be anyway but it still sort of trips the poem up a bit .

Well chosen words carry the reader along. Good work, Liar, and that's the truth. :-)

Tess

Thanks for the comments, guys. To answer ishtat, I tossed in a little of Ye Olde Bard English speech to add to the hyperbole mode. It's really just a silly little poem about...well...a specific pair of...cups. :)

throughout this piece. i like the feel of it. i'm in the midst of its overflow. nicely done........don