All Comments on 'dare'

...and very pleasant to read, but sometimes I think you press too hard with the wordplay, unneccesarily, until it seems to the reader that the whole point is the word tangling - and thus the poem might appear more like a playtime frolic than a group of words that might have something interesting to say as a whole.

I'd like you see you balance the two better - to take some of the emphasis off the euphonics.

I also think you should not post a pile of new poems the same day, as it might prevent a higher quantity of comments, which any writer would like.

Very VERY good advice from TRM.

There are those who cannot, will not, dare not appreciate the exquisite word artistry in your poem. They lose, their loss, you're not less for it -- they are.

For what it is worth, I enjoyed this one immensely. I've many non-native english speakers who seem to enjoy the same word-play you do.