Darkness, like syrup

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Scorpio44
Scorpio44
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As Darkness poured over him
like syrup
he sat -
still and quiet
a sleeping giant
on the back porch

When he could barely see outlines
she came
walking slowly, quietly - - -
until she stood close
dropped her clothes
to the porch
at his feet

Her fingers found his shirt
removed it
stroked his chest
roughly played his nipples
     - he sat -
quiet and still

At her unspoken command
he stood
she pulled his clothes from him
tossed them aside
kissed him
on his neck
   amid the hair of his chest
     - pulling softly -
until he pulled her
        close
and held her

Touching and stroking,
rubbing and squeezing,
nibbling and needing,
melting into the darkness together

Scorpio44
Scorpio44
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AmyfriendAmyfriendover 15 years ago
Mmmm, very sweet

and so sexy with some beautiful images being conjured up for my own vivid imagination.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
I could read more of this kind...

I loved the imagery. You should write poems more often.

evilfairyevilfairyabout 17 years ago
Very sexy

Like syryp.....just gorgeous imagery...

A very erotic write

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Very erotic images...

that stick to the mind like syrup.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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The first two stanzas are awesome, very visual and unique.

excellent title!

seattle rain

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