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All Comments on 'Darkness, like syrup'

by Scorpio44

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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The first two stanzas are awesome, very visual and unique.

excellent title!

seattle rain

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Very erotic images...

that stick to the mind like syrup.

evilfairyevilfairyabout 17 years ago
Very sexy

Like syryp.....just gorgeous imagery...

A very erotic write

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
I could read more of this kind...

I loved the imagery. You should write poems more often.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 15 years ago
Mmmm, very sweet

and so sexy with some beautiful images being conjured up for my own vivid imagination.

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