All Comments on 'Depths of Pain'

but I like it very much! LOL You flatter me, SB. I hope you enjoyed making this poem as much as I enjoyed reading it.

pulling these lines together into a cento. And it's a good poem until the reader gets to this line: "I embrace what is flawed and right," which is just perfectly placed and gives the whole piece depth and meaning. Wonderful work, gf! xo, S.

Nothing much to add to the previous comment by Angeline except that I've just read through a dozen or more of your poems and you really are improving a lot. That isn't meant to be patronising at all and I hope it doesn't sound so.

Very deep, haunting & surreal. I LOVE THIS!!