All Comments on 'Double Dactyl #2'

Cock like a horse?s but

Thick as a tree

You may want to consider moving "but" down to the beginning of the next line. At first, I thought you misspelled "but" and had meant to say horse's butt. Besides, it's best not to end a line with a conjunction.

Well, you've got the form,

but so did he.

Either "butt"

or move your but

like she said.