All Comments on 'Drive'

Or, to be so inspired to explore that speed where other racer's faces disappear! I also enjoyed the "tribute dedication" at the end:

"If emotions raced,

I'd win,

and you wouldn't

understand

why."

Nice job!

~Concentration and

smooth-fast looks

over the shoulder.

Ideological blind-

spots can't be

checked.~

Is a great stanza.

And the ending/ dedication is very cool.

You lose the manic drive a little

I'm not sure if it's the length or language

It races then slows then races again

see if cutting a verse or two out maintains it

You have a lot of promise...I like your work alot

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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