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by demure101

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 9 years ago
vivid

the images are quite vivid set against the gray setting. very nice.

piratepoetpiratepoetabout 9 years ago
Visually stunning

I could easily see the story. Your words were very vibrant and descriptive, I was there walking on that sidewalk

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