All Comments on 'Eyes, Legs and 'ing' Words'

by Sir_Nathan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Fun!

mmmmm

DustystarDustystaralmost 20 years ago
A good ride-ing

A dance, my eyes had a time! I love the title and how it relates to the two odd words out.

I dare you to write a verse where one doesn't swallow the last syllable but makes a tongue to back of teeth sound, like the word 'tempt'. It might make a good bookend for this piece. (You know, swallow and spit? You fill in the blanks here... <big smiles>)

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